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LANDMARK BAR?
Contributed by
Lovingcritters
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Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 07:37:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
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LANDMARK.....BAR?
Settled among wheat fields,
Hot plains high bushel yields.
Tiny village of Wheatland.....
Fifty years ago, my homeland.
Numerous churches with steeples,
and congregations of sweet peoples.
Not excluded the Landmark Bar.
Antique still standing--tiny memoir,
Way back when, my father said,
"Ladies don't occupy bars, steer clear,
dead!
I'm not ten plus 8, I'm now 68....
Pat or Dick say,
"Let's go to the Landmark bar!"
"Great I say, Great!"
My father shakes his tombstone.
Feeling young defying backbone!
I belly up to the bar as the saying goes.
Female bartender, we say our hellos.
Friends suggest a nice drink.
She doesn't know mine, rethink?
"Coors Light Please." I reply.
A bottle as tall as me, I could die.
Somewhere in the Landmark
A lark is singing, from the ceiling
I remark.....
"I've never been this high before!
No wonder you shouldn't go in bars,
they have moving floors."
Somewhere in the Landmark
an old woman's singing,
Landmark stools are spinning.
Bartender's chuckling,
My friends are circling.
Coors light is twirling.
I hear voices chatting.
Top the bar I'm dancing.....
"Whoppppeeeeeee Ride 'em Cowboy
A Coors light at the Landmark is pure joy!"
Created by
Lovingcritters
ConSue
50th reunion
June 26, 2005
"A friend is someone who will help you move.
A real friend is someone who will help
you move your own body safely
from the Landmark Bar!"
*Coors light Smiles*
P.S. I've never been drunk
in all of my life! but I've
certainly had fun being
that way on paper!
Copyright ©
Lovingcritters
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Re: LANDMARK BAR?
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 08:10:30 AM AEST
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very cute my friend
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Re: LANDMARK BAR?
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 08:21:37 AM AEST
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A brilliant description of what may happen at a 50th reunion.
Real life!
I was a stubborn Yorkshire ram when called upon to join any kind of "reunions"
Did not believe in them. Life changes an individual and changes are often not well understood or appreciated. although necessary.
Great and impressive write Consuje
Thanks for sharing it with us
Warm love
Elizabeth |
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Re: LANDMARK BAR?
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by bgj on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 09:15:30 AM AEST
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Outstanding! Great job!
bgj |
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Re: LANDMARK BAR?
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 10:22:16 AM AEST
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| ConSue to this delightful piece i can only say cheers. Did yiu have one for me while you were at it?Hugs from Martha and Bernard. |
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Re: LANDMARK BAR?
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:15:29 AM AEST
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ROFLMAO COnni shame on you hee hee ( just kidding) loved this poem very cute and hey I dont live that awful far away Ill make it up there we can dance on a bar together whooooo hoooooooo
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Re: LANDMARK BAR?
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 02:41:35 PM AEST
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Sounds like you had much fun. I hope you all behaved yourself lol.
Excellent
Love Angelxxxxx |
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Re: LANDMARK BAR?
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:59:50 PM AEST
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This is absolutely adorable, my friend. Be careful, those stools can slide out from underneath you without good friendly support, lololol.
hugz,
Rita |
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Re: LANDMARK BAR?
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 05:37:47 PM AEST
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Momma ConSue you always give us a belly full of laughs with ur wonderful writes. I hope you had an awesome night. Cheers to u.
Hugs,
Dreamer |
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Re: LANDMARK BAR?
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 08:15:13 PM AEST
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Sounds like me if I waas drunk.
funny.
Well if ya ain't never been drunk in your life u ain't missed a lot.
Hang overs are hell.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: LANDMARK BAR?
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by brew on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 09:22:51 PM AEST
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Well been drunk 2 times..............woah was me..hey we all have to live once.but to those who dont use alcohol........wasnt a nice feeling, yet i do have an occisional glass or two of winel Cant hurt ya, and life is tooooooooooooooooooooo short. Gotta live for what we have and will or prefer to have. Great write consue...........always love your stuff.
Brew~ |
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