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Happy New Year...
Contributed by
whywhy
on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 09:40:00 PM in AEST
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I feel like crying, bursting out in tears of frustration ...
never had a new years eve like this.
My mind, my body, longing for something I can't reach,
something I don't even know ...
or maybe just don't want to know. Feel the lust crawling up under my skin.
Whine, red like blood, floating through my wounded lips. But maybe it's just it's taste which makes me think they're bleeding.
Dark eyes, hazy with need.
Stop the violent cry of my soul, which rips my mind apart
and still can't be heard from nobody,
anybody,
ever.
I shift my legs and appreciate the sensation of naked skin brushing slightly against smooth black leather.
I need to be alone...but who'll lick away my tears ?
My face, flushed with heat. I can't stand this anymore.
I'd like to bite down on something,
just to make it cry out in pain ...
or make me cry out in pain.
My thoughts scattering around helplessly.
I don't know what to think, what to believe.
I wanna hurt myself and taste the bitter sweetness of satisfaction.
I'm torn.
Torn by need and lust and frustration and the burning ache
on my longing lips.
I want to scream, to fall. Take everything away from me.
Cut it out.
My desire is darkness,
silken black,
warm
and swallowing all my thoughts that make me ill.
Sadness in my body, sadness on my tongue.
It's almost midnight.
I want to lose consciousness and sink into comforting blackness.
Let the darkness of my soul envelop my body, so there's nothing left
but me. Just feel.
Close your eyes.
This is passion.
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whywhy
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2003-01-08 21:40:00]
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Re: Happy New Year...
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 10:42:27 PM AEST
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That was a very good write, maybe you should call it, Close your eyes, inside me,......
just a thought, thanks for sharing this |
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Re: Happy New Year...
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by Eloise on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 02:20:41 PM AEST
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| what a cool poem... it was really awesome.. |
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Re: Happy New Year...
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by whywhy on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 07:15:25 AM AEST
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| Thank you very much. I really like the idea of "Inside me" . Can I change the title ? |
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Re: Happy New Year...
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by whywhy on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 07:17:19 AM AEST
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| I'm glad you like it...it makes me happy when others appreciate what I'm doing.Thank you. |
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Re: Happy New Year...
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 04:11:29 PM AEST
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| oh...this is a beautiful poem...i love this... |
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Re: Happy New Year...
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by mckayla on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 12:18:26 PM AEST
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Great poem! I t makes me think of where yu could have been to feel like that!
mckayla |
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Re: Happy New Year...
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 01:19:46 PM AEST
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| this is'nt a poem, its an experience, would love to read more by you |
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Re: Happy New Year...
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by bopeep on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 09:23:42 PM AEST
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| very descriptive.. it was very good. |
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