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My Search For Nothing
Contributed by
AmyLee4Ever
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Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 02:46:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm held up by my glass legs
Will they shatter?
I'm hidden by my own pain
Can you find me?
Searching for something that I've lost
I'm too far under
I don't have one chance for mending
I'm torn asunder
I know now what I have become
An immense blunder
My screams are ready to begin
Do you hear them from within?
I know you're out there to be found
But something has kept me bound
I'm broken which I know you see
I can hear you cry for me
Though you're so close I know it's true
I'll never get to hold you
This isolated world of mine
Is not all I bear
For so long I've been forgotten
Living with despair
The only thing I hold so close
Isn't really there
You do exist in my mind
Pain directs me
I believe all that is fake
I search for naught
Copyright ©
AmyLee4Ever
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2005-07-05 02:46:55]
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Re: My Search For Nothing
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 02:57:02 AM AEST
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I feel so lucky to have been the first one to read this. Your .."Expression".. is outstanding and i can relate all too well. I got your message and i was like a kid on christmas could'nt wait to open up my mind and read this i it was well worth the wait Great job look forward to your next present from your mind
MUH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!JOEY |
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Re: My Search For Nothing
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 02:58:07 AM AEST
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| P>S I LOVE the part my glass legs very inteligent |
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Re: My Search For Nothing
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:00:32 AM AEST
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Very sad but excelent writing.
I think we all have felt this way.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: My Search For Nothing
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by ducki on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 05:09:49 AM AEST
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| So powerfull |
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Re: My Search For Nothing
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 12:12:17 PM AEST
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This is a very good poem.. I loved it.. especially the part about the glass legs! keep up the good work:)
butterflygirl40^_^ |
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Re: My Search For Nothing
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by DarkFairyLove on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 01:10:19 PM AEST
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| This peom is great...The question of knowing and not knowing drew me further and further into knowing how you felt and bringing myself into the realization that i have felt this way more than once....You are wonderful and keep up the beautiful poetry...Kayl |
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Re: My Search For Nothing
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:53:20 PM AEST
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IT was so good i just wanted to read it again
tried to give you two five's but they wont let me it deserves a ten but i guess i'll have to settle with a five |
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Re: My Search For Nothing
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 06:29:20 PM AEST
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Jodi you've penned down how alot of us feel at times. A sad, but powerful write. You're a budding flower Jodi. You have your whole life in front of u. Writing helps us release the built up tension within ourselves. It's great how u can pen down ur emotions. Well done Jodi
Hugs,
dreamer
PS who is so proud of Jodi :-) |
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Re: My Search For Nothing
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by Arden on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 11:04:10 AM AEST
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i really liked this poem except for two things
1. Your rhyming was going up and down thru the whole poem, either keep it or lose it.
2. the ending- actually the very last line doesnt really flow well. but maybe thats just me.
I am held up by my glass legs
Will they shatter?
beautiful expressions and nice display of emotions. 4/5
good work.
-Arden |
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