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Pay Close Attention
Contributed by
scottmunster
on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 02:26:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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My friend, pay close attention.
I see the road you’re shifting towards.
And be thoroughly warned.
The road is only a dead end.
My friend, pay close attention.
Learn from my mistakes
You should know my heart aches
From the road’s end.
My friend, pay close attention.
You’re treading on ice.
Your judgment won’t suffice.
Your vision is distorted.
My friend, pay close attention.
The rejection of one
Should not drive you
To the arms of another
My friend, pay close attention.
I understand your pain
I’ve been there too
But you’re acting like a fool
My friend, pay close attention.
It’s a temporary attraction
A simple infatuation
It will pass with time
My friend, pay close attention
I beg of you wake up
Your rejection should not
Become your obsession
My friend, pay close attention
I’ll always be here for you
Even if you hit the dead end.
I’ll always be here, You’re friend
Scottmunster
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Re: Pay Close Attention
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:25:46 AM AEST
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Very very good you are right 100% right pal rebounds never work .. If i got the meaning of this right or wrong P_MAIL me and let know
once again "GOOD WRITING" pal |
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Re: Pay Close Attention
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by Winterland on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 10:01:50 AM AEST
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Very nice poem! It is very hard to watch someone you care about making what you know to be a mistake. I really liked the way you ended the poem. :)
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Re: Pay Close Attention
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:57:26 AM AEST
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you are a great friend this is a very loving poem sometimes though they are stubborn and dont see what we do looking from a distance I hope this person heeds your loving concern
Michelle |
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