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Ice Queen
Contributed by
icequeenelle13
on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 02:10:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Ice Queen-Elle. Yates
Beating of my heart
Sounds so deep
Echoing so loud
I can't even sleep.
I feel as if
Nothings left.
Like an abandoned hotel
My heart is vacant.
Even without the marks
The scars, the pain.
My wrists, my veins.
The stinging, Razor sharp.
The Queen,
Upon her thrown of Ice
Feels that she
Is at nothing, she longs to be at peace.
But after she says her farewell
None shall be well.
She shan't be at peace
No matter where goes.
Because Pain,
Failing, and lost loves
Frustration and anger
Is all she knows.
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icequeenelle13
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2005-07-05 02:10:01]
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Re: Ice Queen
(User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 12:10:28 PM AEST
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good write. i really liked it, probably cause i relate to it. even though it's hard, we have to fight through it all. can't give in to suicide, cuz than we would lose you and that would be bad, cuz you are a good writer. hang in there, please.
wishing you the best of luck!
~sprints
p.s. keep up the good work! i enjoyed reading this! |
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Re: Ice Queen
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by seci on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:02:48 PM AEST
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| you are a powerful writer. i like this poem. i really do, but don't give in to suicide at all. a bad chioce t o make . keep writing and i'll keep reading. |
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Re: Ice Queen
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by seci on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:03:26 PM AEST
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| you are a powerful writer. i like this poem. i really do, but don't give in to suicide at all. a bad chioce t o make . keep writing and i'll keep reading. |
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Re: Ice Queen
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by amanda_13 on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 04:07:25 AM AEST
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elle,
good poem but to me it doesn't make sense yes it rhymes but that doesn't make it flow right i do think u are a good writer though keep it up! |
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