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The Burning Spark
Contributed by
evilfairy
on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 01:50:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Upon a cavernous heart and brittle bones
There are no more tears like a raging sea
Crashing upon a soul that is all alone
Tentative hope growing in a dry dry bed
No longer stretches its weak tendrils
Because hope is long dead
Fury has abated to a quiet whispered sound
And now she never ever screams
Not even when no-one else is around
Hurtful, wishful, wanting stands
To the back in dull, gloomy quiet
And no-one can remember their demands
And somewhere buried deep inside
Lived the glow of a burning spark
That over the years, paled, then died
MW 05.07.05
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evilfairy
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2005-07-05 01:50:25]
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Re: The Burning Spark
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by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 02:22:14 AM AEST
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WOw, awesome work, i love this..amazing, great job
~Clark |
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Re: The Burning Spark
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 07:08:30 AM AEST
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I liked this immensely. The imagery is great and it flowed well. 5/5
Thumper ;o) |
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Re: The Burning Spark
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by arakrune on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 09:45:23 PM AEST
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well done i love it
made me smile
not sure if that makes me a sick person
or not tho lol |
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Re: The Burning Spark
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by evilfairy on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 03:44:30 AM AEST
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| lol - not sure if it's a 'smiley' poem but it's great that i can reach all sorts... heheheh ;) |
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