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Shadows Of Tears
Contributed by
LT
on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 08:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I wish I just could forget you
Today you've been on the mind
You're the most beautiful vision I have ever seen
I kinda lost the track of time
You never knew how much I loved you
One day you'll forget the sounds of my name
This sadness has pierced the soul
And nothing will ever be the same
Always knew it wasn't meant to be
Sometimes I see your face glistening across the shore
Still I wanna wish you only the best
I wonder if we'll see Heaven before they close the door
I'll probably never forget you
The ghost from your image drifts in my head
I'm crying to no one and no one is there
Never asked you to share my bed
Life without you is what I fear
No one can see these shadows of tears
Copyright ©
LT
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2003-01-08 20:40:00]
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Re: Shadows Of Tears
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by LJ on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 01:12:15 AM AEST
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| This just overflows with sorrow. It is a beautiful poem. |
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Re: Shadows Of Tears
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by LT on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 08:30:44 AM AEST
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The words seem to jump from its page.
Well written. |
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Re: Shadows Of Tears
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by kolbrun on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 08:40:17 AM AEST
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Brings back memories ... the pain of love is such a terrible thing.
I love the last line LT .. it's beautiful.
yours Kolbrún |
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Re: Shadows Of Tears
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 10:12:28 PM AEST
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Very real and graphic.
Nice use of words.
Lisa |
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Re: Shadows Of Tears
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th August 2003 @ 06:42:35 PM AEST
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I love the title, very good storyline.
Is this based on an actual event?
With loving a heart,
Carol Lynn |
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Re: Shadows Of Tears
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 08:07:46 PM AEST
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Very sad, but oh, so lovely.. I can relate to this is some ways.
Jenni |
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Re: Shadows Of Tears
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 07:01:31 PM AEST
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First time reading your work. I love how you express yourself. A sad love tale, that is well written.
Please write more.
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