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Tears Of Anger
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 09:06:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Tears of anger
That I’m crying tonight
Tears of bitterness
That my mind can’t fight
Hands full of rage
Know too well their destination
Grab that knife
To take out my frustration
Tears of anger
Colliding with my blood
Uniting as one
Like water that becomes the mud
Angry at the world
I’m angry at myself
For being so weak
For my hearts ill-fated health
So I give in to tears
I give in to self-harm
I’ll continue hating myself
I’ll keep slicing my tattered arm
I’ll keep crying
Tears of anger
Crying them tonight
Tears of bitterness
That my mind can’t fight.
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pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-07-04 21:06:33]
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Re: Tears Of Anger
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 09:24:27 PM AEST
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Great expression in this piece...It's too bad you couldn't vent through your writes, as opposed to harming yourself...Take Care, and I hope things start to get brighter for you soon...
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Re: Tears Of Anger
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by Flyinglow on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 09:25:15 PM AEST
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| wow, i really like your poetry style |
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Re: Tears Of Anger
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by ducki on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 09:45:03 PM AEST
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| Awesome |
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Re: Tears Of Anger
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by BloodyTearDrops on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 10:24:22 PM AEST
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.:Claps All Crazy Like:. This Was So Good. I Mean The Way You Used Your Words. You Could Be Talking To Anyone Or About Anything. It Was Great Reading It. I Got A Picture In My Mind Of The Arms And The Pain.
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Re: Tears Of Anger
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by caido on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 11:00:40 PM AEST
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| Love the poem =) |
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Re: Tears Of Anger
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by wizard on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 11:31:16 PM AEST
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i agree with hauntedscorp..poetry is a great way to vent (as you probably know)...self inflicted harm aside...i thought the poem was great...full of emotion and excellent flow...pick up the pen instead of the knife though...
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Re: Tears Of Anger
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by Whoknows on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:28:23 AM AEST
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This is an amazing poem, I can realate but I cant seem to write about it, I have tryed many times. You did extremly awsome!! Wouldn't mind hearing more of your writing!
+WhoKnows+ |
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Re: Tears Of Anger
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 08:30:32 PM AEST
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Such saddness Rach..
deep angry saddness-
Cut up the page..
not your arm..
write as long as it takes..
Here anytime.
B |
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Re: Tears Of Anger
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 07:16:49 AM AEST
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good write
just a lot too dark for me |
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