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If I could.......
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 08:20:00 PM in AEST
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If I could make your days brighter.........
Mine will be too,
If I could hug you tighter..............
I will comfort you,
If I could wipe away your tears,
than mine will flow,
If I could lengthen your years..........
Than I would do so,
If I could take away your sorrows............
I would do it today,
If I could brighten your tomorrows...........
with simple words I say,
If I could tell you everything will be ok,
you wouldnt believe,
If I could kiss your problems away,
My kisses you will receive,
If I could tell you whats right & wrong,
I'd let you know,
If I could make your faith strong,
Than I would do so,
Than I will,I will give you this & more,
For making your day makes mine,
The days with you I will adore,
For your smile is so devine!
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Re: If I could.......
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 08:35:30 PM AEST
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beautiful sentiment i enjoyed reading it very much especially the part about faith I would love to do so for my husband
Shari |
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Re: If I could.......
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by spooky on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 08:52:57 PM AEST
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| very touching,,very thoughtfull for someone to be with,,,faith be with both of you and everything will be fine,,with all the help from our father,,,and the LOVE you have for each other ,,everything will great,,nothing will go wrong as long as you both believe,,with all your heart,,beautifully written,,,spooky |
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Re: If I could.......
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 10:18:35 PM AEST
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| Christina, sorry I missed this one, my computer crashed and I was off line for a few days, this is a fabulious tribute to your husband, hold on to him he must be a wonderful man |
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Re: If I could.......
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by viola on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 05:20:17 AM AEST
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| I think with you loving him you could heal so much, beautifil sentiment...I really do wish you well. |
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Re: If I could.......
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by viola on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 05:20:22 AM AEST
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| I think with you loving him you could heal so much, beautifil sentiment...I really do wish you well. |
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Re: If I could.......
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by OreO on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 09:01:34 AM AEST
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Awww Christina this is so beautiful girl, your hubby had to put a smile on his face when he saw this one...i think it's beautiful that you love eachother the way you do i beleive in my heart that you and your husband have such a deep bond that you can both survive anything that will ever come your way.....beautiful write ...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: If I could.......
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by MoonlightKiss on
Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 02:48:16 PM AEST
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| aww, such a sweet love poem |
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