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Identity
Contributed by
unbreakable
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Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 06:16:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Eternally changing, never the same
and no single, one person can take all the blame
I can see that to you, this is all just a game
you can't even see the person behind this name
And we base facts upon this world, this lie
we breathe to ask the question why
so sadness lives in each goodbye
You grin and bear it, I'd rather die
Who am I? You ask, but I'll never tell
you can't buy me, I have nothing to sell
I hate you and your world because it's my hell
If you'd only look, you'd see that I'm unwell
When all is said and done, will you even know
who I really am or that it was all for show?
Will my memories die with me when I go,
or do I mark the path with each seed I sow?
Am I your daughter? Do I live next door?
Am I the boy in your math class you always ignore?
you want to know less so you'll never know more
Ignorance is bliss, what else could you ask for?
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Re: Identity
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by waos on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 06:33:15 PM AEST
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That was good, most definitely good, I liked your insight and the questions
(or accusations) to the world for what is here. You did a good job with the
rhythm of this poem too! Nice work.
~Kara |
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Re: Identity
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 09:33:34 PM AEST
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I really liked this, i liked your wise words of wisdom and truth.
Very well and written and very emotive.
A pleasure to read.
Hope to you fellow poet. |
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