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Afraid of What I Nearly Have
Contributed by
Jane_Doe
on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 04:26:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I'll lay here with your hand in mine,
A haven safe for slipping time.
And you will wrap each scarred up arm,
Around my soul, away from harm.
You tell me truths long waited for,
And I confess, I knew much more.
Though only deep within my heart,
Did I believe I would play this part.
We'll kiss and quarrel and laugh and cry,
But with each moment, I want to die.
Because I know to whom you belong,
And he would surely cease our song.
I'll wait here, emotionless, for your return,
Until you come my madness burns.
Though now you're here and I am tame,
Your passionate presence can calm my pain.
But still I fear my moments with you,
Because when you leave my sanity does too.
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Jane_Doe
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2005-07-04 16:26:27]
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Re: Afraid of What I Nearly Have
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by igba on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 07:03:02 PM AEST
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| really touching,very well constructed. |
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Re: Afraid of What I Nearly Have
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 09:35:59 PM AEST
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Very well and emotive.
Your rhyming style was excellent.
I liked this, well done to you. |
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