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The Lady and The Forest
Contributed by
gwenevere
on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 03:31:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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The lady wandered down the lane
In the distance she saw a flame
Curious, she wandered on
Wondering where this flame came from
She came upon a strange, new land
Forest of tree's, upon the ground
A distant voice said"come on in
Come and see what lies within"
She entered there with gentle grace
Spellbound by this wondrous place
Mesmerised by ebb and flow
Of that flame in it's full glow
The soft voice spoke to her again
Welcome to my home, my den
I am guardian of the key
Watch and wait and you will see
The flame burned blue, the flame burned cool
And deep within, there swirled a pool
of magic light, flowing so free
Underneath the magic tree
The lady came of her free will
To that forest on the hill
Now she watches, waits to see
what is now her destiny
Copyright ©
gwenevere
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2005-07-04 15:31:56]
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Re: The Lady and The Forest
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by wizard on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 06:51:11 PM AEST
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great story. very magical.
i noticed your opening comment...is another series upon us?
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Re: The Lady and The Forest
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 07:34:34 PM AEST
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Oh...I love the mystical mood of this... very good..
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Re: The Lady and The Forest
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 10:57:01 PM AEST
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Beautiful poetry magical and illusive at the same time, lovely writting . . .
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Re: The Lady and The Forest
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:29:44 AM AEST
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| This is in a class of its own. Great work here I am as always deeply impressed bernard |
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Re: The Lady and The Forest
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 09:36:44 PM AEST
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another epic saga's upon us!
very dreamlike quality to this.. pt.1
great imagery as always
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Re: The Lady and The Forest
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:34:03 PM AEST
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Well, I have read all of these. I cannot believe how astonishing they are. I have never read a better poem. I was so into it. They were all masterpieces. Thanks for those fantastic writes...
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Re: The Lady and The Forest
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by mom11159 on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 09:56:02 PM AEST
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This definately got my attention now want to read the reast of it so mystical i loved it you kept me in antisipation all through Excellent job perfect imagery Your words so very captivating I loved it
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