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The Whisper
Contributed by
TheTimeOf
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Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 11:06:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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What can be said?
The trees sway so elegantly with the wind
And the mountains are embraced with the setting sun
So comfortable it all seems
Yet still like a wraith do I feel
Gliding endlessly across the lands with eyes of dreams
Well if I thought to have known its all been leveled
Lays broken around my feet
I am waiting with no thought left
Stolen with the depression of my suffering
I can not say what is real and what lives
What dies, bleeding to the carpet once so white
Before I came to stand in this place
And the moon promises to be beautiful this evening
Does that mean you will come once again
Steal this insanity that beckons at my door with
The murmurs of day time routine
(All that continues to endure)
Pride and beauty mean nothing in this enchantment I twirl
Around in fingers to stiff with typing the same words
In different ways
Well it’s the block that calls forth the anger
The stillness of the flow that demands the drink
What do you think now as your whisper grows
Pushing against the window like a kiss of suspense
I wish I knew if I was losing what grasp I had
But so it remains as the crazy torment of what I
Crave is smeared once again here
In metaphors and psychedelic dreams
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2005-07-04 11:06:30]
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Re: The Whisper
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 07:09:49 PM AEST
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Very nice write....I enjoyed reading it..
God Bless! |
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Re: The Whisper
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by TheTimeOf on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 09:51:53 AM AEST
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| it's been awhile since i looked over these old poems!! thank you for leaving your thoughts- it is always nice to know that your words can stir some emotion or image to life. |
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