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Never Forgotten
Contributed by
Vermilion
on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 10:03:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Feelings never forgotton
Whispers in my brains
Memory of your undying beauty
Jolting through my veins
Now every time I look at you
May aswell be the first
But you can't fill this void
You cannot quench this thirst
Just a mirage of colour in time
Gone in a moment of lust
You do not know you have my life
My unrequited trust
I'm just another loner to you
Because you do not know
What is it you do to me
That is making my blood flow
All I can ever be for you
Another face with no name
I suppose you don't see what it is
That makes me not the same
So here I am, I'll always be
I'll explain what I mean
Behind the losers facade
Is something you haven't seen
There are feelings not forgotton
That don't ever go away
Nothing could take the pain
Nothing will make it okay
So just forget these words
They will slowly fade
You wont remember me
Or how we will cascade
For me, this wont be forgotten
It will whisper in my brain
Like the memories of your beauty
Jolting through my veins..
Copyright ©
Vermilion
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2005-07-04 10:03:41]
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Re: Never Forgotten
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by forsaken_soul33 on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 04:33:07 PM AEST
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I know how you feel. Like your just another face in the crowd. You want someone to notice you, but they never do. Cheer up, you will find someone.
I enjoyed your poem. Keep it up
bye,
☺Mando☺ |
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Re: Never Forgotten
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 09:47:17 PM AEST
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| i loved the use of the beginning as the ending. this reminds me of a lot of my earlier pieces, except you simply put my earlier pieces to shame with this one, because mine were quite long with rambling. keep writing. |
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Re: Never Forgotten
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 07:47:12 AM AEST
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excellent expression of feeling.........
love n' hugs nessa |
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