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Who are you
Contributed by
texaspoet2005
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Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 09:53:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Who are you as I pass in my car,
I look at you and never seen you before,
I look into your face,
As I am driving to a place,
I wonder about you.
Are you doing ok.
What kind of life have you lived,
Are you happy, or sad.
Do you want to die or live,
A moment in time.
We pass eachother,
A moment in time to say hi to one another,
A special meeting
That again will never take place.
I just met you,
By looking at your face.
You speed by,
Others behind,
I look into their face.
And then I wonder why.
Why this particular time,
In this big wide world.
Do we get to meet,but yet we don't.
I look over at you,
You look at me,
Just a faint moment in time. only,
But it is a reality.
Who are you ?
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Re: Who are you
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 10:30:49 AM AEST
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This poem is so very what happens in real life...Have you ever had an eye to eye relationship with a complete stranger?
It's really weird and if no one cuts the gaze, it can last for as long as 5 mins. Weird right?
anyways, I'm looking forward to more of your poems.
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Re: Who are you
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 01:07:25 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, texaspoet2005!
Your first post says a lot about you, I believe --- you're obviously a 'thinker'. And I'd agree... it is a shame that we come so close and still are so distant from the many that we pass by everyday.
Keep writing!
~Snemmy~ |
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