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Quack! your dead
Contributed by
ducki
on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 04:25:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Dumdedo,
I love you
Swimming, Spinning, Singing blue
Jumping, Shouting, Flying high
Crying, Bleeding, wanting to die
Up, Down
Wont leave this place,
So sad, So sad, Such a waste
Waiting eagerly for this star shine
Laughing, Hoping
Drinking the wine
You fund my pain
One blow at a time
You fund my pain
Such a sweet tasting crime
Dumdedo
I see right through you.
Copyright ©
ducki
... [
2005-07-04 04:25:16]
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Re: Quack! your dead
(User Rating: 1 )
by FIX on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 12:20:49 PM AEST
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I like whats on the surface of that mind of yours
FIX
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Re: Quack! your dead
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 08:06:55 AM AEST
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The title is funny as hell
the poem is a lil. dark and
light at the same time
poor lil. duckie LOL |
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