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Blue Mountains Under a Purple Sky
Contributed by
Benny14
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Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 02:10:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Blue mountains under a purple sky gather nicely in your eyes
Green tides on copper docksides seem to perpetuate
Where the setting sun’s shadow on your face resides
As dark turns to light, shade to beauty
And that smile, that smile that would make the Trojans forget their war
I realize now that I love everything about you
From the simple sandals adorned by your feet
Carried now so you can feel the earth between your toes
To the flower resting in your hair
With such nonchalance that your artistry need no symmetry
You remark on the beauty of the sunset
But I could say the same for you
Copyright ©
Benny14
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2005-07-04 02:10:02]
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Re: Blue Mountains Under a Purple Sky
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 02:44:57 AM AEST
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| what a way to describe beauty, great job. |
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Re: Blue Mountains Under a Purple Sky
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 06:53:05 AM AEST
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Oh man it's like it's right there and u never ever realised it right?
I really understand how u feel and the best part is when we really open our eyes and look, it's just so so real and beautiful...
Great work!
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Re: Blue Mountains Under a Purple Sky
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 01:41:40 AM AEST
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A peice of heaven right here on Planet Earth and u've captured it so well.
Both of u r very luvky to have such beauty in your lives.
huggs, smiles,
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