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Young Love
Contributed by
frmpoison2static
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Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 10:59:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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here is to the pointless hours we waste.
wasted on something i cannot remember.
remember those times we held eachother close.
and talked about the things we thought mattered.
the picture just seemed to be endless, the dreams and hopes.
all of the late night love, that we share.
our bodies, they felt so close, we fit.
our lives, molding into eachother, our love is in my blood.
our naked bodies, hot and damp, i will hold you in my arms and stare.
connected into our senses, their all focused on you.
my smell,touch,sight,and taste centered around you.
nothing else seemed to be happening, the earth stops spinning.
i will hold your hand, smell your neck, gaze into your eyes, and taste your lips.
i will talk to you to ensure you that yes, this is real, and i am not a liar.
for we are one, i am one with you, your heart in mine, now is the time.
inside, outside. it seems like no secrets are kept, what i see is what i get.
i love you, and you love me.
not another love poem, crap.
for their is so much more than love you will say.
yes, this is true. but without this love nothing else would matter.
this love is the core, the glue that holds everything together.
so yes, this is about love.. because without it...nothing really matters.
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frmpoison2static
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2005-07-03 22:59:12]
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Re: Young Love
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by emystar on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 11:42:26 PM AEST
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Awesome turth!
A masterpeice.
huggs,
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Re: Young Love
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 12:38:14 AM AEST
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Stunning work...this touched me deeply as I can very much relate to the young love you are describing. ahh...i miss that indeed.
I liked the first stanza especially and i really loved your words.
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