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Stuck on Replay
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 10:37:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Why wake to see tomorrow
Why wake to see today
When life repeats itself
Like being stuck on replay
I’ve been here before…
You’ve said this to me…
Stuck on replay
This is all I’ll ever be
I’ve seen these walls…
I’ve been trapped in here before…
I’ve already questioned this
And I’ve always wanted more
I’ve walked down this road…
I’ve bled all I can…
The searching never stops
And I’ve cried as I’ve ran
My heart is still dying…
Too long have I tasted these tears..
I’ve felt every feeling
And I’ve been silenced by these fears
Life is too mundane
These colours are all the same
The picture never changes
In its dull and morbid frame
Please someone just press rewind
Take me off this tiring replay
Light my world in rainbows again
Take me back to a better day
Copyright ©
pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-07-03 22:37:22]
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Re: Stuck on Replay
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 10:43:24 PM AEST
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and you dont like what you are writing lately?...HA!..this is excelent Rach, i loved the ending very much too, very tru about the replay and a nice way to put it to words..poeticly of coures..as always
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Re: Stuck on Replay
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 10:44:39 PM AEST
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| very good! i like how your feelings are expressed .. and yes i do sometimes feel this way |
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Re: Stuck on Replay
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 10:53:16 PM AEST
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Well written...and I can identify to a small extent...
Jenni |
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Re: Stuck on Replay
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by wizard on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 01:16:05 AM AEST
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i like the analogy...i too wish it were that easy to get to a better day.
great post! |
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Re: Stuck on Replay
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 01:36:47 AM AEST
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Nice, creative use of expression in this piece...You laid this out quite well, and I especially liked the last two stanzas---they were great! Keep em coming!!
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