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Paper Skin
Contributed by
icequeenelle13
on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 10:10:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Paper Skin-Elle. Yates
Tearing at my face
Hands like a claw
Cutting into my eyes
Drowning them in pools
Of clear water
I cant take this anymore
I've already been torn apart
Now I know the real reason,
Its all my fault
Burning..
Your lies..
Killed me, Finally.
Inside.
Just to destroy this body
Use my skin as paper
And a blade for a pencil
Slowly I'll compose my death note.
And my site will go black
Crimson will stain me
As I grab my chest
Then regret what I've done
As my skin grows pale and cold
And my life is pulled under
Burning...
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icequeenelle13
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2005-07-03 22:10:48]
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Re: Paper Skin
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 10:54:24 PM AEST
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| whoa .. nicely written .. i hope you actually d ont do this to yourself but you did make a killer poem! nice job! |
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Re: Paper Skin
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 12:52:58 AM AEST
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Very raw. but i like it.
I liked the metaphor you used, your body being the paper and the blade as your pencil. That's powerful.
Well done, all my hope to you. |
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