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Less Than Perfect
Contributed by
AnaBanana
on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 09:44:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You never hear my silent screams,
They seem to never reach.
The biggest thing that hurts my soul
is the very air I breathe.
Your constant *****ing doesn't help,
never talking, only yells.
I cannot think of what to do,
I don't make sense to myself.
Here is the bed on which I lie,
wondering why I've not yet died.
Twice I've come so very close,
but I always fall just shy.
I don't know who to place the blame
on for this twisted game.
I don't know if I'll win or lose,
but to me it's all the same.
Copyright ©
AnaBanana
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2005-07-03 21:44:59]
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Re: Less Than Perfect
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 11:10:15 PM AEST
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| awe! i hope you are not really feeling like this! but in lighter terms...i really liked this poem .. it was straight to the poinnt .. nice job! |
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Re: Less Than Perfect
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 04:22:12 AM AEST
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| brilliant piece of poetry, I likeee |
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