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Accidental Misfit
Contributed by
AnaBanana
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Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 09:40:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Who is this evil "hooker" girl?
I laugh as you say my name.
I guess I'm the evil "hooker" one
who should hang her head in shame.
Oh, but what a stupid joke,
It's all so very lame.
I imagine hands around your throat
as I'm laughing at your pain.
I think of what they say to me
as I roll myself a joint.
My poem, so short but far from sweet,
is short, to the deadly point.
Copyright ©
AnaBanana
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2005-07-03 21:40:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Accidental Misfit
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 10:02:03 PM AEST (User
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im surprised there arent more comments on this. you had wonderful rhythm and rhyme. i think that you can certainly fix the first stanza to rhyme. i loved the ending. sometimes it matters what others think, and sometimes it doesnt. |
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