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I Buried The Sun
<p><strong>I buried the sun</strong></p>
<p><br>I buried the sun today,<br>Its golden crown surrendered to the earth,<br>The sky, once ablaze with his fierce light,<br>Now cloaked in shadows, desolate.</p>
<p><br>My constant dawn,<br>The harsh truth lied in his rays,<br>and in his twilight’s gentle touch,<br>my guide through this maze.<br>A titan of his day, he stood proud,<br>Casting long shadows, powerful and grand,<br>His warmth both scorching and tender,<br>A paradox of a man.</p>
<p><br>And beneath his glare, I grew,<br>In the crucible of his gaze,<br>He was the fire that forged my will,<br>And the light for my darkest days.<br>But now the world is dimmed,<br>The sun, faded away,<br>No longer can I bask in his light,<br>No longer feel his guiding sway.<br>I laid him down in fields of night,<br>A silent sun, no more to rise,<br>His golden beams entombed in soil,<br>His legacy burned into my eyes.<br>My critic, my mentor, my shield and the storm,<br>Now buried deep within the clay,<br>The sun has set, and the night is forever long,<br>For I buried the sun today.</p>
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