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Gone
It felt like home to me
a cozy comfort,living zen,that wrapped me up and took me in.
A warmth of love that whispered soft
to the deepest recesses of my heart
and opened my soul to something never felt,never known
a dream within my dreams broken up just for me
and I felt it and felt me and felt you
swimming in a depth of common place
and peaceful water,heart be still.....
Then suddenly a current,seemed to tip it upside down
and a wave of mixed emotions seems to spill all around
and as the rain is pounding my heart sits heavy once more
and I wish for that peaceful place and feeling.......once more
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