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Tired
Exhaustion without action,
Sleeping without reason,
No changing emotions
I am stuck in this one.
Is it really an emotion?
My heart and head are empty.
I don/'/t want to feel this way,
It is inevitable.
How long can one fight to hold on to their life?
I have lost mine.
I feel myself breathing,
I am not living.
I used to love, care, strive
I am no longer strong.
Let/'/s talk about you.
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