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The flesh is spliced, the mind confused, I know you care, our spirits bruised, alast awakened the missing simpler flare, intense emotion can leave hearts abused; yurned devotion loins unused, none such thoughts or fantasy shall cure;
I can/'/t give up on something as brilliant or true, the day has come, I indeed for rue, can/'/t erase thine deed had due, blinded tortures we/'/ve yet to undo;
Forever silenced forced to block the view, nevertheless highness put away, a forcefield hulk strong, insisting the stay, together as one is the only pure way:::::::
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