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In and Out of Love
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I am so tired, but cannot sleep;
so sad, but I cannot weep
I finally realised, in too deep,
in and out of love.
the heart wants, and the heart needs
the right touch, and the right deeds;
the pretty flower, amongst the weeds,
in and out of love.
you can’t search and you can’t find
with eyes closed or half-blind;
lives are made to be entwined,
in and out of love.
paths cross and then part;
hard to keep a happy heart
lucky just to get a start,
in and out of love.
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