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Strong people cry
Strong people cry, strong people cry.
I whisper to myself,justifying the stinging
Sensation left behind my eyes.
I know this is true but I can/'/t let go
I can/'/t let the tears fall, I can/'/t do it.
Because part of me feels that you/'/ll be right.
That I/'/m overly sensitive like you say.
But part of me also thinks that you/'/re wrong.
Part of me refuses to apologize for feeling.
For feeling what you/'/re feeling, for feeling
What everyone is feeling, for what I feel.
I won/'/t apologize for laughing at dumb
Jokes, falling in love with strangers smiles,
And actually giving crap.
But I will apologize for one thing,
(And not because I/'/m sensitive and assuming
I/'/m being blamed for something)
But because I pity you.
You, the boy who believes that emotions
And logic can/'/t co-exist.
I wonder how you live because,
What does it mean to be alive if not
To feel?
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