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Space and Time
When we're children,
Time is a burdensome constraint;
In our teens we wish to hold it,
A hero with a brush of mysterious paint
In our adulthood?
This is something... peculiar; strange
What we always have, and yet want ever more
A commodity and currency we cannot seem to claim
Whilst space is a language,
One we wish to learn and thus seek;
But its tongue is as primitive as it is complex,
Making it one we cannot seem to speak
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