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loosing your soulmate to death
recently i read a poem
remembering how my mind did roam
and felt each drop of blood within
burn inside my lonely veins
i was in shock and disbelief
my love was dead and so was i
i wanted to be the one that had died
my voice was lost my eyes only cried
i breathed; slowly, slowly, so bereft
i reached out to my children
they were all of him left
my heart remains broken
i wish to turn back time
i see him in their eyes, smiles and ways
through it all i am lonely most days
i wait to die to be one with him again
poetry saved of me, any soul that remains
i have known such love returned and true
he leaves of death, i, the other, remains blue
as in life i know his thoughts, values, dreams
he knew me like no other ever will it seems
remainder of life this living one- feeling the lost one
right beside me, in heart, yet out of reach,
still i feel the burning loss, in soul and mind
life is not kind
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