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Beauty of the Ocean
As I walk along the beach, I feel the rough wet sand collapse beneath my feet.
Warm and effervescent waves cascade around my ankles in a rhythmic dance
High above me a seagull's cries are carried away with the breeze
and a fiddler crab scurries off for the evening
The sun is slowly melting into the porcelain blanket of glass ,
Everywhere a glorious display of pink, orange and purple set fire to the sky ...
Silhouettes of a pair of dolphins enchanting finale displayed against God's curtain call's vibrant glow
I feel the sun's warmth on my face, and the heat and light in my eyes as I shut them
Now all I hear is the soft, hypnotic drone of waves, rush in, now back out, and then in again over my feet
The seagull cries have grown distant as the breeze carries him out to sea
I open my eyes to find the sun has melted away,and it is just me and the abyss
and it is times like this, moments such as these, that shows me God is amazing and beautiful
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