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Laborious Defect
My respected authority has chased me, to the brink of the ledge
With my sweating and chattered teeth, I am now on edge
I struggle with chaotic moods, as some kind faces turn against me
Menial tasks I've done well, are shifting into horrible mistakes
Anxiety is swarming, in my boiling blood
Hating everything I do, or am I hating my self?
It's getting the better of me, an overwhelming guilt
If only I can fix this mess, before my pride is spilt
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