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Tried and Failed Versus What If
Tried and failed, you dove in
What if, you have never been
Tried and failed, the bell rang, and you answered
What if, there is nothing about you that I am enamored
Tried and failed, you stuck your nose in it
What if, your cup, there's nothing in it
Tried and failed, your value is in your experience
What if, any way you slice it, you make no sense
Tried and failed, you will reach your dream
What if, you never came to the arena
Tried and failed, you are battled tested, and I approve
What If, I have no comment, you've never moved
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