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perverse reflection
Within each tear the memory drops, as the rain pours dancing off this tin roof.
Looking for castaways in a sea of opinion stamped shirts, sweatshop friendly.
Looking for handouts from corporate pillow talk, with cold eyes shine.
Finding favor From I'll forgotten freedoms, and cushion change.
Swimming around like a bigger fish on the hook,
forgetting you are too small for bait.
I heard your stories of freedom, it all involves individual rights.
Fighting for your own needs, forget the rest, let's hit the bar.
My tree!
Save the storied history, it is built on computes models anyways.
Rise to the matter of time
and knock the system out
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