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Chemical Reaction
I liked to thank you for the feeling
but I
I think that I have had enough,
in loves burning confusion
many have survived
but for me
it is just to much.
As love took a hold
there were many sensations of pure delight
in a field of moans
I lay in a daze
with love overwhelming in my mind,
in a utopia I had never known before
I found peace
and all the pain was gone.
I'm not sure when
but things started to change
slowly emotional warfare took over
and I fell back into the mouth of madness once again,
The torture
of how emotions ebbs and flows
causes a chemical reaction in my brain
driving me insane...
I'm trying my best
to hold it together
while I exist
here in the burning confusion in a daze,
I'm not saying I don't want love
it's just to much for me
I'm slowly coming undone.
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