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A woman's beauty
That resplendent glaze upon your face,
Of emancipating ferocious blaze,
Ineffable and magnificent as it may,
Reminds me, of a better day.
In the presence of that absorbing numinous,
Your face represents all that is transcendently beautiful.
With those effervescently deep blue eyes
And after a dark day without sunlight,
Your eyes could repaint all over the sky.
That superpower of severe beauty,
Has struck me down with impunity.
Leaving an ingredient of capitalizing splendor,
That now resides in my heart, at the touch, so tender.
Your beauty, so quiescent and pristine,
Unsurpassed beyond its means,
Shocked my heart, making it beating,
For you, many more times, until it has finished.
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