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flame induced emotion pt 1
this anger, hate feels so alive
it's intoxicating ta let it drive
as it's sucking me further into the dive
there're tenticles reaching from the vortex
leech like arms pulling me slowly
towards the gravity pool
i'm alive, but i'm not thinking
responding quick with words of spite
i'm watching as i'm sinking
faster, like quicksand
with the vibrations of my voice
and the rabid pace of my heart
gravity pulls and i'm fighting
when it feels like everything
i wonder how much my source is distorting,
disrupting on my way to the center
what is breaking, what is burning
in these flame induced emotion
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