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Unhidden Dark Doubts
I could not help but feel more down than ever, I had to relax deeply and breathe the pure air of the clouds,However,I need to fill my mind with an image that can fill me with love and joy, Still I had need to move on in life of not me being hurt from my painful past, I have to now be in control of my life and begin to smile to life, Evidently, my life has to be steer clear to be freed of any doubts and bad thoughts, Eventually, I was very tired of my running and suffering towards more disappointments,Perhaps,I need to make a quick change in life to improve of having a brighter future, So I did make up in my mind no more of feeling unhappiness, doubts, bad thoughts to help me overcome my fears in life for good.
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