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Assembly
Heard tell of an art that happened yonder of late
The art man girl had gathered all these funny colored objects
Like a vastly numerous collection of these art objects made with funny colors
And then assembled them like life forms
The people had gathered and remarked fondly and it was deemed successful art
Most liked how the art reminded them of life too
And for some it magnified their moon dreams
Then there was this other art where the girl man had taken all these pieces of life
And instead of making life forms had gathered and shaped them into art form
Like all the life pieces came together real abstractly through his or her hands
And the people remarked and some exclaimed in a positive manner
Actually most exclaimed quite positively
For many it was an art that had satisfied their need for
From there the art was bought and bought sold
And the art went on about its living
While the people petered on about so and some not so
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