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White Walls
White walls are caving in around me
can’t my mother come and save me
white walls are caving in around me
why can’t they see this is not the place for me
white walls are caving in around me
let me go hide in my room I plead
white walls are caving in around me
invade my privacy as they please
white walls are caving in around me
come get your meds they call
white walls are caving in around me
this place will not fix me you see
white walls are caving in around me
this is where they send the lost to be found
but you see these white walls
cannot find what as been lost so long
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