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Fallible
Systems of humanity fallible by definition,
Play with the minds
Of those who still hold a tiny grain of Hope. Lessons to be
Learnt from the Negative, from observing dysfunctional humanity
And the Resulting destruction.Eyes wide open to the anarchy of no
Boundaries, eyes tight shut to personal blindness, bulldozing
Personas of egocentric belief, ears tight shut to learned wisdom
And the cogs of machinery turn, pressure builds, a cooker ready
To explode and there lying in the aftermath hidden beneath the
Rubble, "The voice of reason undisturbed .......
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