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Child of Sorrow
Sorrow sits at the foot of the cross and weeps.
The life blood of innocence conceived of the complexity
Of youth ebbs and flows,salty pools mix terror and fear
With visions of sinfulness, rejected of humanity and judged
By God,she is alone to carry the burden,her finger traces
The word guilt onto an unlined forehead, and she is medically
Cleaned,religiously judged,and in the love she has for her
Child that lived, a dichotomy of the light of a full heart and the
Darkness of loss when in the eyes of life she was yet a child.
Sorrow sits at the foot of the cross and weeps..........
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