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A Dip Into Waters
A dip into waters...
posters all are we-
varying reasons-
this laying bare of personality.
Would you share with your co-worker
these feelings opened here?
Cracking back in comfort akin to
the tab-snap of cold beer?
Friends 'round your fishing pole,
new lure to admire?
How many of them now
would sit in comfort as you mire
on
about love and death and life and loss,
joy and smiles and freedom's toss,
of coins of loins of letting go?
How many of them really KNOW?
The real YOU.
So FEW, I'll toss out on the air..
1 for ten know your depth..
1 for hundredth bare percept...
poor you thank goodness....
you are here...we hear...we care
in this venue.
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