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Weather's Storm
The sky cries,
The sun's anger grows,
The wind throws its tantrum,
The plants dance
during weather's trouble
but weather gets angry
sending its worst, the ice.
The sun hides, temper drops,
The sky cries harder,
its tears turn to snow
the wind blows harder
making it colder
turning the snow to ice.
The plants start to die.
after awhile the weather misses the plants
so they call off their fierce
anger and hate.
Then they bring the plants back.
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