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Ariel
Ariel alights on gossamer wings
To dance her way across my page
Twinkle eyes that shine, fire bright
A quiet spirit, charmed with age
And thus she goes about her day
This gentle soul, whose words beguile
Her letters carry - endless delight
Fill my thoughts, ever hence my smile
How may one be, not inspired
By depth of feeling, she embrace
Passions run, her love is great
And brings the happiness, pon my face
Words seem but, to fail embody
How I do see, this kindred soul
Her grace it doth, enrapture me
To fill hitherto, - an empty hole
I dare be bold and tell her thus
Faint hearted stuff be not for me
Not when I glimpse within her thoughts
Humbled great, - at what I see
Ariel is the name of a sprite in Shakespeare's - The Tempest
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