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Watch Red
I know exactly where you hide.
Feelings i kept too long inside.
Craving your edges releasing pain.
To watch the blood flow down like rain.
Your blade slowly ripping my skin.
Every cut feels like another win.
A puddle of red lays on the floor.
But i can't stop begging for more.
The world is black, the light is dead.
The last i see is a pool of red.
chlois, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems by our other authors for each one you submit.
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