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A layer shed
Suppressing my wild beast, untamed desires from being released.
Surpassing my wildest dreams, imaginations unleashed.
As she would not listen, she with the fiery gaze, she would not dismiss this in me, she did not design this labyrinth, this hollow maze.
Gazing at the world outside, gazing from within, interpretations are one of a kind, the crystal shards reflecting from the whites, the whites of your eyes.
Fall down so fast, so far too fast, never thought, never mind. Now it all seems so far away, a hedonic retreat, a simple pleasure yet too shedding its rind.
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