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YOUR GONNA GET HIT I kept crossing the road over and over again
it was early morning and the road was curved
I was on the main road and there was an adjoining road
the cars were sat there, giving way to me
I progressed in a zig zag pattern weaving closer and closer
as I crossed the road ,
I was in the middle of the road when I suddenly saw
that a car a turned into the main road I was on, and it was inches away from hitting me in my left side,
that s when I screamed those words that woke me and my husband up
"YOUR GONNA GET HIT"

The dream felt like a warning , a vision,
to have penetrated my physical form with such strength
in order to cause my sleeping body to vocalise those words so forcefully,
waking so abruptly enabled my conscious mind to recall each and every detail
and sense deeply that this was more important than most dreams,

I was compelled to tell my children and my husband that morning every detail
and I WARNED them "PLEASE PLEASE be careful on the road , cause I feel a strong sense that someone is gonna get hit"
"PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE BE CAREFUL"

Then I drove my 18 year old son to college as I usually did,
and just after dropping him off I turned onto the main road and as I reahed the curve
a young girl who was at the junction drove straight into the left hand rear side of my car,
we exchanged details and I Called my husband and I said,

"IVE JUST BEEN HIT"

I was in so much shock I hadn't thought of the dream warning until my husband turned up at the scene and said
when he put the phone down after my call
he thought of the words id shouted out from my sleep
"YOUR GONNA GET HIT"

This is a true account and I did get compensation for the incident.

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DO NOT remove the line break <br /> html coding at the end of each line break, these are needed to form the correct lines.

I kept crossing the road over and over again <br />
it was early morning and the road was curved<br />
I was on the main road and there was an adjoining road<br />
the cars were sat there, giving way to me <br />
I progressed in a zig zag pattern weaving closer and closer<br />
as I crossed the road ,<br />
I was in the middle of the road when I suddenly saw<br />
that a car a turned into the main road I was on, and it was inches away from hitting me in my left side,<br />
that s when I screamed those words that woke me and my husband up<br />
"YOUR GONNA GET HIT"<br />
<br />
The dream felt like a warning , a vision,<br />
to have penetrated my physical form with such strength <br />
in order to cause my sleeping body to vocalise those words so forcefully,<br />
waking so abruptly enabled my conscious mind to recall each and every detail<br />
and sense deeply that this was more important than most dreams,<br />
<br />
I was compelled to tell my children and my husband that morning every detail<br />
and I WARNED them "PLEASE PLEASE be careful on the road , cause I feel a strong sense that someone is gonna get hit"<br />
"PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE BE CAREFUL"<br />
<br />
Then I drove my 18 year old son to college as I usually did,<br />
and just after dropping him off I turned onto the main road and as I reahed the curve<br />
a young girl who was at the junction drove straight into the left hand rear side of my car,<br />
we exchanged details and I Called my husband and I said,<br />
<br />
"IVE JUST BEEN HIT"<br />
<br />
I was in so much shock I hadn't thought of the dream warning until my husband turned up at the scene and said<br />
when he put the phone down after my call<br />
he thought of the words id shouted out from my sleep<br />
"YOUR GONNA GET HIT"<br />
<br />
<br />
This is a true account and I did get compensation for the incident. <br />

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