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Lovely Girl
Lovely girl, you're all I need.
Lovely girl, you're all I see.
So won't you just come and fly with me?
I swear to you that you'll see, nothing but bliss girl, I'm all you need.
Lovely girl come stand on the edge with me.
If you really love me girl, you'll jump with me.
Then we shall be written down in history.
For the mortal people that are born, they'll see.
But you and I will be nothing but free.
Living blissfully for eternity.
Doesn't that just sound oh, so lovely?
So lovely girl come and fly with me...
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