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What I find in you...
The sun reflects off yours eyes and breaks through any clouds that obscure my vision.
The very air that you press through, causes ripples in my simple and humbled exsistance.
I long only to provide you with the ration to sustain your prescence,
for my ration is you, without you I shall perish
You provide the entertainment to captivate my souls crowd,
the laughs flow the sighs prevail.
The smiles you cause, send waves through my being,
uncontrollable, yet a welcomed friend... the feeling is too immense for words.
The very earth trembles as you gracefully frolic amongst its creatures,
blessing them as you have done for so many others
The moon praises you with the tides,
crashing upon the shores we travel
And as we wrap our minds in sheets of eachother,
a story is told with no ending written.
We give eachother everything we made ourselves to be, and we accept the change we embrace the strange oddness
And I find in you, what it is I dream of while lying in lush pastures, the life of love of living.
I love thee more than any,
I hold thee above all...
the life I live now belongs to you
For I surrender my heart to yours....
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